Charlotte and the exploding peaches

There was a little girl named Charlotte and she had a little sister named Freya. One day Charlotte was eating her dinner at school when she was getting her peaches out, she opened the packet and BOOM! The peaches exploded in her face.

She told the teacher as quick as she could so that she could clean it up and so that Lucy could help. She was ok and she was eating again.

The End By Lucy and Nicola Editor Alex

Charlotte and the ANGRY Bench

One day the was a girl named Charlotte who came in to school one day and she answered her name in the register. the teacher was Mrs Rooks. First it was literacy (charlotte’s worst lesson) we were writing Fantasy stories she wrote a story about a little girl named Ashley. After the lesson Charlotte sat on the bench in a school garden. When she sat down on the bench suddenly she fell of the bench and Lucy helped her up with her cream coat on finally it was the end of play time

The end

By Lucy and Nicola Editor Alex

My Tanka

My Tanka

 

Blossom arriving

Tree turning beautifully

Trees have sweet senses

Flowers appear in green grass

It was beautiful to watch

Summer had arrived

Children celebrate schools end

Fun fairs come to town

Children ask parents to go

People go on holiday

Soon leaves fall of trees

Brown ones, red ones, some were green

Children collect big conkers

It gets colder in autumn

By Nicola B

Historical Stories.

We have been learning about the evacuation of children in Britain during World War II. Here are a selection of our stories that have World War II as their setting. I think that they are brilliant. Well done Year 4.

Mr Sharkey

The Story of Bob Dickinson

Boom!  Boom! Boom! Bob Dickinson was petrified and worried as the dust settled slowly around his shaking lean body. He coughed heavily. As the smoke cleared gradually he could see his destroyed, wrecked home in his South  Manchester  street .With his emerald green eyes he looked at the smashed windows and a  pile of brick that used to be his lovely house .It was the worst moment in the 39 years of his  life . He was worried about his children. 

Bob soon found out that his children were missing so he went to the beach because it was their favourite place. He got there but it took him 2 hours. However he would do any thing to get his children back. He went back home and thought of other places to look. Bob was awake for a long time but soon he nodded of.

 The next morning Bob went to go and get this post. One envelope said “that he had to go to war” but Bob was too worried about his children so he looked for the last time. When he got their there was a message in a bottle. It said “that his children were in the war” and Bob said “I have to go into war because my children are in danger”.

 

Bob went to his mum’s house to tell her but she disagreed. Bob begged   but 2 hours later he gave up, he said “ I give up I  am  not going into war.” Bob slowly walked home .He got home and went to sleep. Bob had a nightmare but he slept through the whole thing.

His horrible nightmare was that he had gone into the war and he came back to find his children but when he got back his children were dead. He woke up and said “ That’s it I am going to war and I don’t  care if I get shot by a gun. I just want to save my children.” So he packed   his bags and left his broken house and set off to war.

Bob was so good at shooting the others. He  shot the Germans but  he was not in the right place so he travelled to France .In France  Bob killed everyone  accept  the boss who had the children so he said “ right I will fight you” .So he got all the weapons he could  find and started fighting. The boss was winning but  Bob kept on going on. Finally Bob won and freed his children and got enough money to buy a new house and Bob become a millionaire.

By Nicola

Bob’s War Story

Boom! Boom! Boom! Bob Dickinson was petrified and worried as the dust settled slowly around his shaking lean body. He coughed heavily. As the smoke cleared gradually he could see his destroyed, wrecked home in his south Manchester Street. With his emerald green eyes he looked at the smashed windows and pile of bricks that used to be his lovely home. It was the worst moment of the 39 years of his life, he felt heart broken. He was worried about his children and his house. 

Bob looked for his children everywhere he looked especially in the forest. After five hours of hard work he decided to stay at his mums because of his bombed house. But waiting for him at his mums was a golden envelope. The envelope said that bob had to go to war!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bob felt surprised but puzzled he was so scared he nearly fainted but luckily he didn’t. Bob got to the train station with a very teary face, he was going to war. Meanwhile Bob Dickinson’s girlfriend Mary Check was with their two children Susie and Joey Dickinson. They were on a very dirty boat. The children were terrified and heartbroken that they would never see their dad again. Suddenly a massive storm started. The waves were crushing against the boat. The boat suddenly got washed up on a German beach!!!!!!! 

Bob was now on fighting for his life and his country. His armour was heavy and he felt shattered. He suddenly spotted a very dirty beach. He took the risk and went to rest on the beach and guess who as there Mary, Susie and Joey. At first Bob thought he was seeing things but he ran over anyway. It was them!!!!!!!!!

Bob quickly took them home and then to the hospital. They suddenly woke up in their medical beds “Were are we” Joey said “ don’t worry your in the hospital” the nurse said clearly.  Luckily it wasn’t serious.

The next week they bought a house in Wales and lived happily ever after. Bob and Mary even got married!

By Emily

 

 

 World War 2

Boom! Boom! Boom! Bob Dickinson Was petrified and worried as the dust settled slowly around his body. He coughed heavily. As the smoke cleared gradually he could see his destroyed, wrecked home in his south Manchester Street. With his emerald green eyes he looked at the smashed windows and a pile of bricks that used to be his lovely house. It was the worst moment of his 39 years of his life. He felt heart broken. He was worried about his children.

Bob Dickinson was heart broken because he had nowhere to sleep and live. Poor bob. Afterward he went to his mums house to tell her about evacuated children and his destroyed home “Can I live with you mum” Said Bob “Yes you can my dear” Said Bobs mum. 

Many weeks later, Bob got a letter Saying you need to join the army we are low on troops please join. But bob did not join he went to find his children.

He had 1 more day and then went. The day finally came Bob went to find his children in the countryside. He got there on the train he knew what care home they were at. They were at country care home. So he went there to collect them and took them back to Bobs Mum house.

When they got back to Bobs Mum’s house her mum had 5017 thousand pounds from the bank to buy a lovely new home.

By Alex

 World War 2

Boom! Boom! Boom! Bob Dickinson was petrified and worried as the dust settled slowly around shaking lean body. He coughed heavily. As the smoke cleared gradually he could see his destroyed wrecked home in his south Manchester Street. With his emerald green eyes he looked at the smashed windows and a pile bricks   that use to be his lovely house. It was the worst moment in the 39 years of his life. He felt hart broken. He was worried about his children.

 

What am I going to do? Said Bob I will look for my children. Then Bob looked at his broken home but they weren’t there. On Monday Bob woke up as possibly as he can. After a wile Bob got a latter saying you can go to the war (if you want) oh dear said Bob what am I going to do? But he caped on searching and searching and searching. Bob was petrified and angry. After a wile Bob decided to go to the army. Then Bob went on the boat. Bob was feeling sea sick and he got sick on a man’s shoe. After Bob went off the boat and shooting violently

 

Bang! Bang! Bob was doing very well. Half way though he went to the beach and he found a piece of one of the children’s clothing thank goodness said Bob.

 

Then another letter came and said we are in the war in 32 devil road from mum and the children. Let’s go there! Bob was jumping with excitement. YES! YES! YES! After that the children saw Bob dad and after that they had a new poplar house and Bob and the children were ecstatic.    

By Ben

 The Time of  War

BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! Bob Dickinson was petrified and worried as the dust settled around his lean body.

He coughed heavily as the smoke cleared gradually he saw his house in his street with his emerald green eyes he looked at the smashed windows that used to belong in his front room. It was the worst moment in his 39 years of life. He was absolutely heart broken. He was worried about his to children and his wife.

 

” Penny! William! are you there?” Shouted Bob. “You are Bob, right? I know where your children are. There being evacuated !!”

Bob grabbed Penny some choclate. When he arrived they weren’t there. “Where could they be? Have you seen my children?! 1boy and one girl with black hair?”   “I saw them rush of before. They said they were looking for a a bloke called bob Dickinson.” “OH NO!!” shouted Bob, “I just lost them by the skin of my teeth!!!!!!!!!!!   it hurts me to wonder where they are! Oh, they could have gone back to the house. They could have been there the whole time” said Bob.

 At last he arrived. He climbed into the children’s old destroyed bedroom but they were not there. he looked everywhere but there was no sign of them. Bob was eggsausted. Meanwhile the children were on a small hill in the middle of knowhere not far from they hadn’t got a clue! The children hadn’t ate for several days. On the hill the trees was bare, they didn’t dare to wonder. William was the oldest. Penny was only 6 so William had to look after her and make sure that she was safe. Luckily they saw a man passing by. A kind man saw them, he was from the city. He said…”Ooh you poor whippersnappers” and gave them both a peace of bread. they were very grateful.

Many weeks later they were sent to the train station. Meanwhile Bob was still searching for William and Penny. He decided to check the train station one more time. He saw William’s face pressed against the windowsill and Bob ran in front of the train and singled it to stop. William and Penny jumped off the train and leaped in to Bob’s arms. Bob now saw their mother in the distance. They all gave each other a great big hug. But Bob and Helen did have some serious injuries. The children just needed  a few stitches. Bob had a broken arm and they had to stay there for a few days. But after that Bob raised enough money to buy a new house and England won the war and they were happy for the rest of there lives.    The children grew up to be as smart  as Bob. Penny had a little boy and named it BOB !!! 

by Kayleah

Bob Dickinson On the Hunt

Boom! Boom! Boom! Bob Dickinson was petrified and worried as the dust settled slowly around his shaking lean body. He coughed heavily. As the smoke cleared gradually he could see his destroyed, wrecked home in . With his emerald green eyes he looked at the smashed windows and the pile of bricks that used to be his lovely home. It was the worst day of his 39 years of his life. He felt heartbroken. He was worried about his children.

 

Bob went looking for his children. First he looked on the beach but there was no sigh there.

Then he looked down the next street. Next he decided to go to his dads. Then he heard the postman say” Bob has a letter from the army”. Next he got the letter and read the letter it said “Dear Bob please join the army we don’ have many people. We only have 1ooo people”.

 

The problem: will he go to the army or will he find his children? He decided to find his children. Next he sent a letter back saying “I have lost my children. I will find them first”. Later he started looking. First he looked on the beach again but there was no sigh there but then he saw something in the water. He sprinted to it. It was a bottle with a message. It said “Bob Dickinson’s children are in my house. My house is 41 Dusty Ave Springfield Wigan England.

 

The problem! The problem! It has been solved. All I have to do now is find her. Then he ran as fast as he could to find  the person. Two hours later he found the house and knocked on the door. No one awserd so he knocked again. This time someone awserd. It was a girl. As soon as they looked into each others eyes they where in love.

The next day they went to dinner together. She said her name was Ava. He didn’t notice that he was in Greater Manchester and the slightly bombed café was called Home Sweet Home. The next day he asked her “will you marry me?” she whispered “yes” and 1hour later he yelled “ where are the children?” she replied “ holiday in south Africa” he said “ holiday in south Africa” he said “thank you for telling”. He said “have this gas mask” “and will you help me build my home back” and she yelled “yes”. Later that day there children came home and they were found and they got married.

 Many weeks later they had a baby and they named the baby Emily Dickinson. The day after that the house was back to normal and they moved out to Wales because it was safe and sound there. They never had a problem again apart from the children falling out.  

by Lucy