Will’s Bedtime Letter

                                           Wigan st.andrews    Mort Street


                                                          Wn6 7au   

77  Anywhere Street

Wigan Springfield

Wn6 7au



Dear mum

I’m writing to tell you that children over 7 years old should be able to stay up later because they have a lot of homework about the stars. I can play educational games like fifa 14 and minecraft. I want to play fifa 14 because I have a lot of great players on my ultimate team like willian.  Minecraft will help me with my building skills and it’s a really fun game. I will talk to my friends as quiet as I can if there still on and there letter worked. Speaking to my friends will help with my socialising skills for this reason children over 7 years old should be able to stay up later.


You’re sincerely,


Braidie’s Bedtime Letter

l.c can I write in persuasive writing 

wigan st Andrews

mort street



99 Random road





21st may 2014


 Dear Mummy and daddy,

I am writing to tell you about children 7 years and over should have there right to decide there  own bedtimes on weekends. Just think about lie ins on Saturday morning and Sunday morning and a tidy bedroom. The other thing I can play on education games because Mr Sharkey said and a friend of mine said she goes to bed at 12:00 on non school nights’ can be a happy child because it is not school.

Finally I have been studding the stars in science. This is why children 7 years or over should stay up later on non school nights.

Your sincerely,


Bailey’s Persuasive Letter

L.C can I write in a persuasive style?


                                                                    Wigan St Andrews

                                                                     Mort Street


                                                                     WN6 7AU

Anywhere ave

Springfield Wigan

WN6 7AU                                                                    21st May 2014



Dear mum + dad,

I am writing to tell you that I strongly believe that children who are 7+ should be allowed to choose there own bedtimes.

If you let me, I would clean my room, and go on educational games what will help my building skills.

That means you can have a lie in, I could speak to my friends with my ear piece what is using my speaking skills.

Please let me pick my own bedtime. 

I would do more homework, and it’s not even a weekend!

I would not be grumpy in the morning, what will be true, not grumpy like in the week.

I strongly believe that children over 7 should pick there own bedtime.

                                    You’re sincerely,



Abbie’s Persuasive Letter

                                                           Wigan  s.t Andrews  mort  street

Spring field

Wn6 7au

Wigan  , spring field  

99 Anywhere street

Wn6 7au



Dear parents ,

I am writing to tell you that children  over 7 years  old  should  choose their own bedtime s at weekends.

My teacher mr. sharkey said to me at  home time  that I have to do  my  home work  at night , and  it is fun  because its glow in  the dark . I don’t have  enough time  to do  it in the day so I have to do it at night. Of case   we will tiddy my room  so its spotless and  also I will go on my computer on my educational games.  I can do my home work also take to  my friends on my x box and I can lay in the next day.

Those reasons children over 7 should be allowed  to choose their own bed times at weekends


Your sincerely,