Braidie’s Bedtime Letter

l.c can I write in persuasive writing 

wigan st Andrews

mort street



99 Random road





21st may 2014


 Dear Mummy and daddy,

I am writing to tell you about children 7 years and over should have there right to decide there  own bedtimes on weekends. Just think about lie ins on Saturday morning and Sunday morning and a tidy bedroom. The other thing I can play on education games because Mr Sharkey said and a friend of mine said she goes to bed at 12:00 on non school nights’ can be a happy child because it is not school.

Finally I have been studding the stars in science. This is why children 7 years or over should stay up later on non school nights.

Your sincerely,


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