Oliver’s Animal Adventure Story

L.C. can I begin to write a story based on one that I have read?

 Bob the gross happer needs to know how to get home safely. He went out to the park and got lost. Bob the gross happer is different to his brother and his mum because he was born a gross happer. They lived in the front garden of 10B and he saw the band stand across the road. Bob the gross happer was green and covered in slime. All the other grass hoppers called him Shrek but he just didn’t listen .his mum and his brother are his only friends .he never ever came out of the house this is the first time he came out “o no” said Bob to himself “I cant believe this!” Bob ran to the band stand and went into the whole but all the other grass hoppers were there eating slimy slugs .They all turned around and laughed. They all surrounded him and threw stones at him .He ran out and was in tears .He went to the playground he jumped on a swing and then he saw 10B he ran into the middle of the road. Then a lorry ran him over and he got knocked onto the side walk. He woke up in the vets then thought who would take him. To the vets he is a gross happer then they put him into a cage then Bob looked at a girls name tag it said Beoncey .Then he looked at her fat face and she was gobbling a dounut, it had pink icing and white sprinkles she put him into her van and took Bob to the park .He was once again across the road from 10B Then he saw a lolly pop man the lolly pop looked at Bob and ran into the road and all the traffic stopped. So Bob walked across the road and squeezes through the gate and there was mum and his bro.

Grace’s Animal Adventure Story

L.C can I begin to write a story based on one that I have read?

Honey was a very crazy bemblebue but she was very clever. She had bright yellow and black stripes and they glowed in the dark. she lived on the bright yellow  petals of the  beautiful sunflower in the bottom of the glorious garden. One day she overheard her dad speaking, “what are you talking about dad?” she said curiously.

“nothing.” Said dad quickly.

“And mind your own business,” said mum hastily.

“blah blah blah!”  said Honey brightly.

“shut up!” said mum sourly.

“don’t shout,” said dad kindly.

“oh sorry, “said mum “I shouted a little bit then.”

“its o.k.” said Honey reluctantly. “well dad I was just wondering do humans cross the road?”

 

The next day honey went out on a quest to see if humans do cross the road, she came to a big tall figure and she looked up “WOW that’s tall.” She said to herself. Then she saw some black and white stripes on the floor, and cars stopped when humans walked over it. “I wish cars stopped for me.” she said to herself silently. So she tried to cross the road but a skateboard nearly ran over her “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” she screamed, but then…………

 

She tried to flap her wings and then she flew up in the air “WOW!” she said out loud crazily. Half way across the road “I can make it.” She said to herself. “I have made it,” she said “ooh there’s a big tall person that has a badge and it read  P.C. Nelly. So I decided to sit on its shoulder “hello. “said P.C. Nelly.

 “Hi.” Said Honey “can I be your friend please?”

“yes,” said P.C. Nelly.

“I managed to cross the road safely, “said Honey.

 “Well done!” said P.C. Nelly.

“thank you!” said Honey kindly.

 

“Please can you walk me home?” said Honey.

“Of course,” said P.C. Nelly.

“Oh and can you cross me and my family over the road as well?”

“yes of course I will,” said P.C. Nelly

“oh look there their,” said Honey “ oh mum dad look this is my new friend P.C. Nelly, said she will cross us all over the road safely so none of us get squashed.”

“oh thank you!” said mum and dad kindly.

bumble bee on yellowbadge

By Grace

Beth’s Animal Adventure Story

L.c can I write in the style of an adventure STORY?
Beth was a very quiet lidybard but she was always happy. She had black dots on her back. She was bright red and her bright red wings where awesome. She lived in a garden on the top of a flower in the in the middle of the garden. One day she overheard mum and dad, Beth said “what are you taking about mum? She said quickly.
“Nothing Beth. “well there won’t be any point in taking mum. “don’t be cheeky replied mum and dad. “whatever.” Replied Beth. “stop being cheeky shouted dad.
Beth walked to the zebra crossing to the pavement. She nearly gets hit by a bus but gets hit by a cyclist Beth goes home and her words are mixed up. “ih.’’ Said Beth
“what?’’ replied mum and dad. “I don’t know what you’re saying.” said mum. “doing you are “what, are you taking about replied mum and dad.” Oh I think I hurt my self “said Beth.
“how have you, hurt your self,? Replied mum and dad. The next day, she goes to the park at the park she gets wet by the milk float, she is soaking by the milk float. The milk floats bottles all smashed Beth goes home and, gets dry. Mum says “why are you wet? Replied mum. Because the milk mans bottles all smashed.”
Beth said how do humans cross the road.? Well you go to the lollipop lady ok, replied mum and dad so they all go to the lollipop lady. And cross the road with the lollipop lady.

By Beth