L.C. Can I write a story in a familiar setting
by Amy wright
My mum bellowed , if your bad Ill take you to Aunty Deangers Aunty Danger was the evil women who lived in the middle of a street. Her house was smaller than the overs the rest were bigger than her, s. She is about 44 years old and always wears old, fuf cloves .She gives you a strange look that makes you feel petrified to be near her. Her house is creepy because it has webs and spiders all over it.
My name is Amy and I’m 8 years old.by the way I LOVE playing football and rugby.Im really small for my age and I’m really scared of going to aunty dangers.
Later that day I was playing rugby with my imaginary friends. I passed the ball to grace but it went the wrong way because of the wind and I smash my mums best ordmend. My mum came in she said put your hat and coat on I’m taking you to aunty danger’s we walked down the damp dark street I looked at aunty dangers’ the windows were so dirty you could hardly see through them. Ok then I’ll let you of this time but next time your bad I’ll take you to aunty danger’s.
The next day I wanted to play with my new bow and arrow. My mum said to play with it out side but my dad was gardening I couldn’t play with it inside because there was expensive. when my mum went to work I decided to play with it in side so I shut the door so my dad could not see I ran into the kitchen and grabbed my bow and arrow but I shot the table with the fish tank and the table fell and the fish tank broke the fish went every were and the fish were dead by the time I looked at them then I heard the door unlocking I ran up stirs then I herd a shout Amy get your hat and coat on I’m taking you to aunty dangers I walked down stirs slowly I saw my mum stud near the broken table I stud out side then we started to walk down the damp dark street
when we got there my mum left my . it looked old but she’s only lived there for one year . The windows had card instead of glass . I knockt on the door and there she came and answered the door. Hello she said I I ran away from home I said well come in me dear. Aunty dangers felt warm and cosy. And there was millions of children being nice to me . when I got home my mum said if your good I’ll take you to aunty dangers so I guess it was not so bad after all.
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My mum bellowed if you’re bad ill take
You to granddad jakes house.
Granddad jakes house was scary and freaky. He lives in a massive house. His garden looks like a jungle. He is about 99 years old and he likes watching sky sports news. He wears a Manchester united kit all the time he always has van persie on the back. I love playing football with my friends. I am 9 years of age and I am about the right size for my age. I am really scared to go to granddad jakes.
Later that day I was playing football outside and I did a sizzle kick over someone’s fence and smashed there window and my mum heard me. Put on your favourite and coat I’m taking you to granddad jakes she shouted.
The next day I asked mum cold I go and watch man united vs. Liverpool mum said no. mum said she was going shopping for food. When she went I put her wedding ring down the toilet in aggravation and then flushed it down the toilet. Later on I heard the doorbell go it was mum. Mum said has everything been alright yes I said. Mum said she was going to put her wedding ring on don’t I said why she said because… I had spit it out I said I put it down the toilet and flushed it down the toilet. Put on your shoes I’m taking you to granddad jakes house. I stood outside granddad jakes house. I knocked on the door and granddad Jake answered it. Mum said he as been naughty so I got him out of my way. Granddad Jake had a box of toys for me waiting it was like he had planned it. The toys were brand new. Now my says if you’re good ill take you to granddad jakes. My granddad still supports Manchester united.
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My mum bellowed “If you’re bad I’ll take you to miss poppet!”
Miss poppet is fastening person. she always wears a pop star Toto dress and she looks at you as if she is evil but her house looks up side down and wobbly on the edge of a cliff. It broken bits falling down.
My name is Samantha and I’m 8 year’s old And I love playing ball and I’m a bit small for my age .I’m really scared of going to miss poppet house.
Later that day I was playing throw the ball but it hit the dog. When it was meant to go to the dog show, but now. She can’t now. my mum said ”Right get your hat and coat I’m taking you to miss poppet just as we got to the spooky old house she said I’ll let of this time I’m taking you to miss poppet.”
The next day I wanted to play with my favourite mermaid doll. but I need water so It can swim on its own so I asked my mum if I can go in the pool and
play mermaid but my mum said no . so I went to the bathroom and I got my mum’s favoured dress and dress then shoved it in the plug hole and filled bath and it started go to other the edge. My mum came home and she said “put on your hat and coat I’m taking you to miss Poppet opened the door and it look she nearly grabbed but she just moved then my mum said lets go. So she said bye.
The second day I wanted to play in the back with my friends. But I was grounded so I sneaked out and played with my friends and we played tigy scarecrow and I went in side to get a drink and my was dad was there he said“ I’m not letting you of this time now I’M TAKING YOU TO MISS POPPET. I tried to run away but my took me to my room and told me to get dressed. because I was wearing my party dress so I got changed. and I put my shoes on and we went to are door and went out side miss poppets house looked like it moved to another place. It felt like when I went in she
me. My dad knocked on the door and ran away and I but she didn’t answer so I knocked and this time she answered and I was shaking so much and she said come on in I won’t bit but when I went inside I so 100 children and I loads of games like hide the toy hook the duck and hide an seek and lots more and I wish my two best friends charlotte and jenny but they appeared in no time then I interjoost them to my now friends but there really best friends and I couldn’t be leave how happy they were.
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My mum bellowed “If your bad I’ll take you to skeleton manor!”
Skeleton manor is the e strangest placwhat was built. The skeleton king was about 20 years old and he wears a scruffy clock with bits of blood on it. Skeleton manor is a castle on a dark, dark, dark, dark, cloud hovering over a boiling scorching laver mounting.
My name is charlotte. I am 8 years old. I love drawing.
Later that day I was playing football in the house and I broke the expensive clock .my mum shouted “RITE PUT ON YOUR HAT AND COAT.I AM TAKING YOU TO SKELETON MANOR!.”
We w her walking DOWN the deep dark street. We looked at the front door. “Rite I will let you of this time but next time I’m taking you to SKELETON MANOR!”.
The next day I set up a Minnie golf club. Monday-Friday 10 .pm- 1.am.I invited all my friends they all came. It was the end of the miny golf club. We were all tied but we never got to sleep.
Someone sneaked in at night and smashed the window. When my mum came in from work my friends were dancing to her best music naked and piddling all over the floor. The called all their mum’s and she sent me to skeleton manor. We stood outside the door and my mum left me outside. It was a black and slimy door handle. I knocked on the door and my hand was coved in black slime. There was a theme song thump bang thump (it was repeated over and over). The skeleton king saw me through the grimy, black windows. He had a sad look on his face. He is lonely and friendly but no one is his friends. He walked slowly to the door with a knife in his hand and when he opened the door I screamed “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH pleas don’t kill me”. “I won’t kill you “said the skeleton king in a soft voice. “Come one on in . I walked in the front room it smelt of fruit. We played lots of games like foot ball, rugby, hide and seek and a staring compaction.
Then I went home at 8.00 o’clock. My mum said “If your good I’ll take you to skeleton manor”.
I felt amazed. It was a brilliant feeling.
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My dad shouted “If you’re bad I will take you to the button eye lady”. The button eye lady is the weird lady who lives at the bottom of the road. She is about 99 years old and she always where’s the same track suite every day. Her hair is bright red with black ends. Her house is leaning to the right side her house is like a haunted house, it has a tale that someone went in and never came out again.
My name is Grace and I am 8 years old. I have blond long hair and I wouldn’t want to go to the button eye lady.
Later that day I was playing catch with my friend Amy in the kitchen. When I was going to catch the ball when I missed and knocked of my dads most expensive beer glass. He nearly knocked my of my feet. He shouted at the top of his voice “PUT ON YOUR SHOES I’M TAKING YOU TO THE BUTTON EYE LADY”. When I was walking down the road people with dresses on and coats were staring at me. When we got to the house my dad said “I’ll let you of this time but next time your bad your going”.
The next day, I really wanted to play with my new toy octopus but my dad said I couldn’t play in the paddling pool. So I decided to play inside I went upstairs into my dad’s bed room I looked in his wardrobe. I stared at his best red adidas huddie top. I ran down stairs with it and shoved it in the sink and turned on. All the water gushed out. 1minute after I started playing, my dad bashed in through the door. He screamed “PUT ON YOUR SHOES I’M TAKING YOU TO THE BUTTON EYE LADY”!
I stood outside of the ripped door and the wooden green rotted window, it was horrid. I went inside there was pictures of cupcakes and lollipops. It looked like a bakery I heard the button eye lady mixing ingredients. I went in the kitchen and she was there. She wasn’t so bad at all. When it was time to go home she gave me a cake. I said to my dad “please” can I go to the button eye lady please! My dad said when you have finished your home work and don’t forget to bring be a delightful cake. ”Bye”
BY GRACE LEWIS Y4
My mum shouted at the top of her voice if your bad I’ll take you to little uncle Benis
Little uncle Benis I will tell you about him now.
He lives in the oldest house I have seen before. It is really creaky house and it is really high
Up and Ther are some steps what lead up to the top and the steps are really creaky steps
And it stinks like rotten eggs that’s been duct in a garbage bin and it was black
As anything and you would not like It that much you would die. All about me my name is Leila and I like it when my
Friends come to my house and I am very very very! Terrified to go to little Uncle Benis
That’s all about me.
Later that day I was playing with an axe an and I was running at a tree and I chopped it down and my mum and dad came and they where like angry bulls chasing I pise of red so that mines that they where so angry.
So they took me but just as we got there they said I’ll let you of this time but next time I’ll take you the next day a was playing with a ball
And it went flying across the room and it smashed the TV and then she got back and then she took me to little uncle benis and I said please please and I started bursting out crying but guess what yes you got it right they took me and instead I got some sweets and a bit of every single pop you can get .when I got home my mum said if your good I’ll take you to little uncle benis the end.
My mum bellowed “if your bad I’ll take you to granddad’s home!.
Granddad was a old man. He was 73 years old and he had never had a wash for 3 years. He lived in a house at the bottom of the street .it was little outside and it was number 112. There was I little girl who visited her grandma every day. Out side the biding there was stances on the wall. My name is Braidie I am 8 years old. I love playing football and skating. I hate going to school. I have the most amazing friends ever. I have blonde hair and I have blue eyes and I am really scared of going to Granddad’s home.
Later that day, I was playing on my skates in the living room and I knocked the most expensive vase. It fell off the window sill and smashed. My mum screamed, “Right! Put on your hat and coat, I’m taking to Granddad’s home!”
As I was walking down the misty street, my mum said, “I will let you off this time but next time you’re bad I’ll take you to Grandad’s home.” I was so relieved.
The next day, I really wanted to play with my new toy duck in the bath. My mum said that I couldn’t go in the bath. So I went in my dad’s wallet and got £200 and took it into the bathroom and put it in the plug hole. I filled the bath up and flooded the bathroom. My mum came inside and said, “Put on your hat and coat, I’m taking you to Granddad’s home!”
One of the workers answered the door and she said, “Come inside and have some sweets.” I thought that if I went a net would drop on me.
I went inside and there were lots of people inside there. My granddad said, “Hello”. There was cake on the tables and coke and tea and it was actually really good.
Then he took me home and my mum said, “If you’re good I’ll take you to Granddad’s home.” Now every day I try to be good.
When my mum was just going to work she screamed “if your bad I’ll take you to Mrs go go”. Mrs go go lived across the street her house was full of children. The house was haunted mrs go go was always holding a mop and a rolling pin . Mrs go go look to cook .I am called Bailey , im 8 years old . I love to read and wright stories . I have blond hair and have blue eyes . I am kind and caring and helpful . When my mum came home from work I had broken the springs in the bed because I was jumping on it to much and there was springs every where . “ Right get your hat on you are going to mrs go go “ !. She bellowed . We walked across the street and stood outside the house .What would it be like ! . There might be killer ghosts and giant spiders and mrs go go might be evil . “Right ill let you off this time “ my mum said . The next day I had broken the window because I was playing with rocks outside and one hit the window . “Right im taking you to mrs go go “ shouted my mum . I knocked on the door of mrs go go’s house .”Come in “ mrs go go said . “ hello “ I whispered . “Hello my darling” mrs go go said in a funny voice . “ come in come in” mrs go go said .Then I went in the living room what would it be like ? There wasn’t any killer things in there . There was a dance floor with dancing ghosts and they where friendly . “woo hello whooo are yoooou “ one of the ghosts said .“Im Bailey “.The living room was full of kids dancing with the ghosts . Then I went into the kitchen what would it be like in there?. There was the weirdest thing ever a friendly Frankenstein. He was eating cheese , then I went up stairs . The floor boulds was creaky and the bathroom door was on one peace of wood. Next I went to the garden there was a swimming pool what was in the shape of a ghost . It was time to go home I didn’t want to leave because I had the most amazing time. When I go home I really wanted to go back .
My mum and dad bellowed “if your bad I`ll take you to the haunted house”. The haunted house is down the street. A ghost lives there. The ghost is about 210 years old. It has green massive eyes, there terrifying . the ghost has ragged clothes and a rag hat. His house is a large house with a slimy door. It is on the edge of a cliff leaning. With plants all over it rapped all around. My name is Erin and I am 8 years old. I love going to school. I’m not that tall. I have blond hair that’s short and I have blue eye’s and normal clothes. I am kind caring and friendly. I love grapes. I’m really, really scared to go to the haunted house.
Later that day, I was jumping on the table and I knocked off my mum’s favourite expensive vase. When my mum got home she roared at me “RIGHT! get your coat I’m taking you to the haunted house”. Just as we got to the spooky old slimy house my mum said “I’ll let you off this time but next time your bad I’m taking you to the haunted house”.
The next day, I was making a picture with old materials. When my mum went to work I looked in her wardrobe, got out her wedding dress and I cut it up and stuck it on my picture. Then I got my dad’s wedding clothes and cut that up and stuck it on my picture. Suddenly my mum came in the door “what have you done!!! RIGHT I’m taking you to the haunted house”. My mum dragged me down the street to the haunted house. She left me outside the gate. I was petrified.
I went to the door . I knocked on the door and a skeleton answered “hello come inside so I did. “there is some food on the table help yourself and a ghost lives here, he is eating some food too” said the skeleton so I did get some food and I saw the ghost. I had two tuna sandwich’s and I had some grapes and a piece of chocolate cake. Then me the ghost and the skeleton played a board game. Then I went home. So the haunted house was attualy a kind ,caring ,friendly place. Now my mum says “ if your good I’ll take you to the haunted house”.