Molly’s Story


One day I went to my cousin’s house with my sister and my dad. My name is Molly. I come from Wigan, and I’m eight years old. My cousin said I’m my name is sofie. I’m twelve years old I have brown hair and I love music. I’m a good writer and I have brown hair. Your dress is pink just like mine. Then Sophie showed me around, she did have some pets she said they are rabbits but I didn’t no there names. I have two cat there could Daisy a and Fizz, fizz is 4 and Daisy is nearly 11 and she’s black and green and has a grey tail.

Then I found a new door and me and Sophie and went froe. Next I fell froe a toasted marsh mellow it was giant slide. Me and Sophie was looking everywhere north, south, east and west but she didn’t see me.So there was only one place to look IN THE TOASTED MARSH MELLOW, she jumped and jumped until she had to go down the toasted marsh mellow, so she did and she fell down slowly Sophie had to get there fast before the marshen turned me into something. But Sophie didn’t get there in time so I got turned into a chocolate crocodile. After that, I sour Sophie she picked me up and climb up the laddeder.


Suddenly we jumped onto the marsh mellow river and Sophie took me in out and I turned back. soon we saw a door again we jumped on 10 marsh mellows and sophie could reech the handle so she opend  it and we went out just intime for me to go home.

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