Long ago there lived a beautiful dragon called Dino. His skin colour was green and blue. He lived in a green forest under lots of mud. It was ice cold. On top of the mud there was an old cottage it was one million years old. In the cottage lived a little girl called Jizabelle, she was 9 years old and had brown long hair.
One day Jizabelle went for a walk through the forest. When she was walking she was looking at the sky. The sky looked very sunny. There was a very big rock that Jizabelle tripped over and hurt her knee.
Jizabelle could not get up because of her sore knee. She tried and tried to get up but she just couldn’t. The sky was getting dark and Jizabelle was getting scared. Just then Jizabelle saw something flying up in the air. It was Dino coming to fly Jizabelle to the scraggy little cottage. Jizabelle was surprised, she had never seen a dragon before. Dino took Jizabelle back to her little cottage. Jizabelle realized Dino lived under mud were it was ice cold. So Jizabelle wrote an invitation to come to her cottage. She left the invitation on top of the sloppy mud.
Later that day Dino saw the letter and knocked on the old cottage door. Jizabelle was making dinner for her and Dino. Dino leaped in to the kitchen and Jizabelle and Dino ate the tea together. Dino realized that Jizabelle was such a nice beautiful girl. Jizabelle said to Dino “would you like to live with me” Dino said “yes”.
By Jizelle
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I really liked Jizelles story
Comment by sophie y4 02.23.10 @ 5:50 pmI really like your story jizelle on the other hand i like the ending part that was so cool
Comment by molly 02.24.10 @ 6:03 pmI thought writing a dragon story would be hard later I really enjoyed it.
Comment by Jizelle 04.20.10 @ 7:39 pmit is good jizelle ending part that was so so so cool
Comment by year4 04.22.10 @ 8:03 pmJYour story is well good yet i liked the ending the best
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Comment by year4 04.27.10 @ 7:18 pmI liked doing it on the other hand I found it a bit hard to do.
Comment by Jizelle 05.18.10 @ 7:23 amI rote my dragon story in my book then I typed it up on a piece of paper.
Comment by Jizelle 06.02.10 @ 8:23 pmI rote a first paragraph then I rote my second paragraph.
Comment by Jizelle 06.02.10 @ 8:24 pmI enjoyed making the dragon stories similarly everyone enjoyed making there dragon stories.
Comment by Jizelle 06.09.10 @ 7:26 ami likey your story jizzele and i like mollys too:)
Comment by shanice 06.10.10 @ 1:26 pmI liked doing are dragon story because it was fun
Comment by Jizelle 06.16.10 @ 7:26 pmI enjoyed making my dragon story because we got to type it up on the computer.
Comment by Jizelle 06.20.10 @ 7:16 pm