The wind
Wind, wind passing through
I can’t see the wind can you?
Wind, wind your blowing so hardly
When are you going to stop
Your knocking down my flowers
And your knocking down Blackpool tower
Wind please please stop.
by Shanice
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It is very good and enjoyable
Comment by sophie 12.03.09 @ 6:04 pmmy poem is good i think
Comment by year4 12.03.09 @ 7:22 pmyours is good shanice
Comment by year4 12.04.09 @ 10:25 ami like my poem abit
Comment by shanice 12.06.09 @ 5:45 pmIt is so cool your poem
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Comment by year4 12.08.09 @ 11:55 amWell done to all year 4. I love all your poems the`re great!
Comment by Constance 12.13.09 @ 5:40 pmshanice your poem was exallent
Comment by sophie 04.23.10 @ 7:40 pmit is raely raely raely good Shanice I think there is lots of rining words Shnice
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Comment by year4 06.07.10 @ 8:13 pmi really liked my poem and i am very good at poetry and i enjoy poetry:)
Comment by shanice 06.10.10 @ 1:36 pmI enjoyed reading the wind poem because I didn’t
Comment by Jizelle 06.20.10 @ 7:32 pm