The wind blew straight through
The city.
It screamed round and round like a screw.
Why is it so misty?
The wind, the wind why can’t you stop?
I want to go out side but I’m not.
Wind , wind please be calm.
Everybody wants to be warm.
Finally wind you are calm
Now we all are warm.
And we can play in the dorm.
by Ruby
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ruby your poem is fantastic its better than mine from shanice
Comment by year4 12.03.09 @ 7:54 pmRuby you’re poem is amazing from LAUREN C
Comment by Lauren Cooper 12.05.09 @ 8:47 pmRuby your poem is brilliant and i love it
Comment by joe 12.10.09 @ 7:26 pmjoe y4
i like it its very good and good describing words
Comment by shanice 02.01.10 @ 2:22 pm